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sherab : Myna  Qui from her morning walk

from her morning walk

Posted on Jul 15th, 2008 by sherab : Myna  Qui sherab

A shoe in the window, or it's a cat
She seemed to say, with her mouth half open
Pointing with both hands. See. There. Look at that.
Face damp with spray (or tears from the ocean.)
"it came out less than I intended,"
She said clearly, I could hear. Both eyes
Look at me. The cat...
"I walked there," making coffee,
"Couldn't see the point," she said,
"Clearly." The soft grey in the corner.
And curled around her ankle.
Faint moaning in the distance,
She shakes the droplets from her hat brim.
A little cry of hunger from below.
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Nicole : lovelightsinger
about 2 hours later
Nicole said

it's so vibrant, so palpable… awesome. very effective. well done!

sherab : Myna  Qui
about 11 hours later
sherab said

Thank you Nicole.
sometimes things are much more interesting if we don't look at them directly.

Nicole : lovelightsinger
1 day later
Nicole said

indeed! we catch the most amazing things out of the corner of an eye, as it were…

Terrill : Spirit of butterfly
16 days later
Terrill said

Hello Sherab,

Your poem reminded me of a photo I took in May of a pair of shoes resting on a side street window ledge in Victoria BC Canada. I was fascinated by what the story might be that left them there. Your poem is better than the one I had imagined.

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sherab : Myna  Qui Posted on July 15, 2008
by sherab

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